Sunday, September 12, 2010
I still remember it like it was yesterday. I was at Rachels house and we were outside playing dodge ball with her two neighbors on her neighbors driveway. We were on teams, Rachel and I were on one, and the other two girls were on the second. The winners would be whoever reached 20 points first. We had to of been playing for atleast thirty minutes. Rachel and i were full of ambition to beat the other team, and when we finally realized we were the winners, the feeling of joy and pride took over us. One minute i was watching Rachel's hip come toward me so we could bump hips and the next minute i was on the floor. As i was laying on the sidewalk at the bottom of the driveway, i realized that when we bumped hips, i lost my balance, fell, and rolled down the driveway. I couldn't help but laugh and when i started, the others jumped in. It was an embarrassing, but really funny moment.
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ReplyDeleteThe story is quite interesting, although you could go into more detail and really describe the setting. The setting to me just seems like any other street. I couldn't really feel what you were feeling during this. You could also go into more detail as to how the game was going before you won.
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